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>>133817
>He nodded silently
Is nodding supposed to make a noise?
What a retard

>>133817
The way is switches between Mrs Schoppenboer and Soei is evidence that he basically got the AI to generate it for him, not “improve his ideas” like he claims

>>133824
>but, her eyelids had these… weird red specks on them…
Marge does she have AIDS or something?

>>133857
They are probably petechiae, and as soon as I read that the first time I was certain writerfail put that detail in because he knows from experience sadly, apparently it’s common in suicide attempts, especially hangings, but also can happen in ODs.

>>133858
I looked more into it and petechiae is also a sign of bulimia, so that might also allude to that, but it is still common in hangings and OD’s like you mentioned

>>133858
>>133881
yet another example of writerfails genius: putting in a detail that can be interpreted in different ways that all make sense

>>133882
obsessed

>being writerfail

I've responded to writerfail. Now we wait for June 13th or July 4th.

>>133817
saar I am not reading that. Why does it suck and why is the other thing better

>>133854
do retardcacas really?

I finished reading it out of spite and good God, I really want writerfail to succeed even further

>>133970
geg is it really that shitty?

>>133970
Maya is stuck in the Psych Ward for three months btw
Nobody ever stays longer than 2-3 weeks, and those who need further care are usually sent to dedicated hospitals, and even then that’s usually meant to treat Schizophrenia and SEVERE bipolar and PTSD
What’s worse, Arno and Maya exchange phone numbers and listen to music together, which means they have their phones, which they would never be allowed to have in a Psych Ward
This nigga couldn’t even bother to research how a fucking Psych Ward works and it really pisses me off

>>134068
and every redditnigger recommends this for being "peak"

>>133970
stopped reading here
what garbage

>>133970
im never reading it why does it suck

>>134369
saar please answer me o algo

>>134395
>saar english is my 5th language after hindi, urdu, bengali, and tamil, you must do the needful and read it for me so I can translate it into my mighty baharat tounge

>>134397
just answer le question please

>>134398
>he doesnt know about notebookllm
ngmi

>>134399
>shilling shitty AI software instead of answering the question

>>134398
still hasnt been answered award

>>135229
I'll answer you, Zaryan! Gove me like 3 hours

>>135268
thanks saar

>>135268
its been 3 hours

>>135306
And we hereby mourn this Zaryan for he'll have to wait even more to receive xis answer

>>135306
You could solve this by just reading it yourself.

>>135308
Erm that would require actually doing something

>>135306
I know. It's a legitimate slog to read through this shit. Every emotion is being handed to me on a silver platter, like it's supposed to make me feel anything. This retard 'author' has no room for subtlety. I'll send you a chapter-by-chapter breakdown like ZrokGPT after I fucking tread through it all

>>135312
is it really that bad?

>>135314
Yes, it's so fucking bad.

>>128880
2 months

>>135316
the sheer tonnage of coal in this one screenshot rivals the entire indian mining industry like holy SHIT this is bad

>>135322
its genuinely baffling that redditpedos actually think this is good.
actually, they probably dont. they probably think it's fucking terrible. they just dont want to break the heckin wholesome 100 reddit gold keanu chungus vibes, so they call everything good, lest the monsune of trannies decend upon their house

>>135316
Why does it read like a retard with Asperger, and how does Maya get the upper hand on Coco? We should establish the capital punishment for such people

>>135324
>because the plot needs to happen, you chud! stop complaining!

>>135316
>during training
And he only used AI to “correct his ideas” and definitely not to generate the entire thing for him
I bet he leaks about AI generated shit with xis cord xisters

>>135347
The average PLOOOOOOTTTEEER
>Don't question things, just turn your brain off and enjoy da PLOOOOOOOTT
>Erm ever heard of PLOOOOT inversion chud?
>Clearly you've never had to write a PLOOOOOT before
>ChatGPT is bad because it writes better PLOOOOOOOOT than I do
>Indirect responses? Metaphors? Figures? Shut up and let me PLLOOOOOOTTTT

>>135355
they really say this!

>>135324
>An at most 100 pound, 5'6" loner who spends all her time on her computer would totally beat a 5'9" 130+ pound national-level amateur rugby player in a fight.
>Because she would, OK!

>>135357
>well, coco was actually shocked by Mayas violence and was paralyzed in fear! freezing is a perfectly natural response to shock and fear! It’s not like coco plays a game where she is constantly tackled and attacked, because then that fear response would make absolutely no sense! Thank god there isn’t a sport like that, or I’d look like a real idiot, wouldn’t i?

>>135312
I decided to skim through this and it genuinely unreadable. the pathetic excuse for why Maya tried to kill herself was clearly an afterthought and simply there to get the plot started, which is insulting. it makes no sense for any of her classmates to actually give a shit, because I guarantee that nobody would even know who she even is and it makes even less sense that they’d give her a gift or whatever. and the psych ward section made me so angry at how inaccurate it was that I actually had to go outside
this ””””””author”””””” is clearly a 30 something year old who’s only trauma in life (outside of being trolled on xitter) was their favorite food place shutting down when they were a kid
disgusting

>>135366
>random classmates
>caring enough to send gifts to people
Who the FUCK is writing this rusted shack of a story GEG no one in the soystory of forever would do that, this person is clearly trying to write something he is not familiar with because he's a stupid animalistic goy that needs to be put down

>>135370
Coco's clone

I didn't read any of thaat shit above, just saying Coco is the strongest

>>135378
I just realized that image of Coco is the only surviving example of her improved portrait. I've found Mymy's and now Maya's remains as the missing piece.

>>135370
i think its obvious that xheir favorite character is maya and they're doing this as a self-indulgent fantasy

>>135395
Please put these goyim out of my misery

>>135397
...MISERY?!