Ongezellig
IAZ and soft NAZ
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>>78489
In my opinion, I believe that Coco is actually a very unhappy person inside because of the past, and because of this, she portrays herself as an eternally joyful and smiling girl. and that's why I gave this name to my art (ref by the way)
In my opinion, I believe that Coco is actually a very unhappy person inside because of the past, and because of this, she portrays herself as an eternally joyful and smiling girl. and that's why I gave this name to my art (ref by the way)
>>78509
I mean she does have other emotions than constantly being happy, but we never see them for obvious reasons. Maybe one day she'll snap for good, but I wonder if it will be Maya's or Mymy's fault
I mean she does have other emotions than constantly being happy, but we never see them for obvious reasons. Maybe one day she'll snap for good, but I wonder if it will be Maya's or Mymy's fault
>>78511
and I have even more about Coco. I believe that in the end, Coco and Maya will just switch places, Maya will become more confident and strong and she will finally have real friends, and Coco will continue to fall into the pit of hopelessness because of the trials that have fallen on her, and at this moment, when Coco is so ill, her older sister Maya will come to her, who I used to need help from my younger sister, but this time it's the other way around.
and I have even more about Coco. I believe that in the end, Coco and Maya will just switch places, Maya will become more confident and strong and she will finally have real friends, and Coco will continue to fall into the pit of hopelessness because of the trials that have fallen on her, and at this moment, when Coco is so ill, her older sister Maya will come to her, who I used to need help from my younger sister, but this time it's the other way around.
>>78510
>but we never see them for obvious reasons
we have seen them. she was shocked when Maya said her favorite painter was Hitler, confused when Vera took her to her office, frustrated when her computer wouldn’t work and when Mymy insistently asked Maya questions, sad when telling Maya she knew she didn’t have friends, and angry when Maya insulted her.
>>78519
Coco is older than Maya.
>but we never see them for obvious reasons
we have seen them. she was shocked when Maya said her favorite painter was Hitler, confused when Vera took her to her office, frustrated when her computer wouldn’t work and when Mymy insistently asked Maya questions, sad when telling Maya she knew she didn’t have friends, and angry when Maya insulted her.
>>78519
Coco is older than Maya.
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>>78520
Maya's birthday starts earlier than Coco's birthday, therefore Maya is 3 months older than Coco
Maya's birthday starts earlier than Coco's birthday, therefore Maya is 3 months older than Coco
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>>78525
there's just so much wrong with this shit, like first off why in the world would it be in english, now this could be just some weird translated version, but if that is what massa gave us, massasissies what is thissss? like in english? THE nigga that won't give us SHIT in english and almost hates his outside people?? i don't believe this shit, again that's if that's what he actually gave and not a weird tranlated version, like even if we would say that they actually wrote in english, that's not possible they aren't supposed to know english at all/barely, maya you COULDDDD assume but it's a REALLY far stretch, even for coco really, just not really possible i don't believe it, then there's also the weird text like why the fuck is the number 16 so weird compared to the rest in coco's thing?? massa really outdid himself there, BRAVO MASSA! like in the maya version at least the numbers are written like the letters but coco? yeah wow, blvd really didn't care about her cocoFAGS are BTFO'd (i love you coco zaryans but i had to) it does server its purpose of giving us more lore on them or whatever but massa not like thiss also wrote a mile of text again award. MASSA NOT LIKE THIS!
there's just so much wrong with this shit, like first off why in the world would it be in english, now this could be just some weird translated version, but if that is what massa gave us, massasissies what is thissss? like in english? THE nigga that won't give us SHIT in english and almost hates his outside people?? i don't believe this shit, again that's if that's what he actually gave and not a weird tranlated version, like even if we would say that they actually wrote in english, that's not possible they aren't supposed to know english at all/barely, maya you COULDDDD assume but it's a REALLY far stretch, even for coco really, just not really possible i don't believe it, then there's also the weird text like why the fuck is the number 16 so weird compared to the rest in coco's thing?? massa really outdid himself there, BRAVO MASSA! like in the maya version at least the numbers are written like the letters but coco? yeah wow, blvd really didn't care about her cocoFAGS are BTFO'd (i love you coco zaryans but i had to) it does server its purpose of giving us more lore on them or whatever but massa not like thiss also wrote a mile of text again award. MASSA NOT LIKE THIS!
>>78528
these are translated versions, the originals are in Dutch.
>THE nigga that won't give us SHIT in english and almost hates his outside people??
he had Ongezellig translated into 14 different languages.
these are translated versions, the originals are in Dutch.
>THE nigga that won't give us SHIT in english and almost hates his outside people??
he had Ongezellig translated into 14 different languages.
>>78530
*by volunteers back when youtube allowed anyone to make subtitles.
*by volunteers back when youtube allowed anyone to make subtitles.
>>78525
Why does Coco love Turritopsis dohrnii, a literal jellyfish?
Why does Coco love Turritopsis dohrnii, a literal jellyfish?
>>78587
probably because she wants to float around and... do whatever jellyfish do.
probably because she wants to float around and... do whatever jellyfish do.
>>78588
isn't it because she wants to be "immortal", or eternally young?
isn't it because she wants to be "immortal", or eternally young?
>>78525
>Coco is the opposite of Maya
>”What I want to be: Veeeeeeeeereeey old”
is Massa implying Maya is suicidal?
>Coco is the opposite of Maya
>”What I want to be: Veeeeeeeeereeey old”
is Massa implying Maya is suicidal?
>>78743
Foreshadowing and characterization so extremely subtle only a schizophrenic could connect it. Bravo Massa.
Foreshadowing and characterization so extremely subtle only a schizophrenic could connect it. Bravo Massa.
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Sorry Zaryns, there's no 3D content yet, but I've drawn 2 pieces of art with Holden.
>>80234
Really want to know what you'll do with the models when you'll be done
Really want to know what you'll do with the models when you'll be done
>>80240
as I wrote above, I would like to first repeat some moments from the pilot in 3d and then I would like to make short beautiful animations, for example Coco playing the drums.
as I wrote above, I would like to first repeat some moments from the pilot in 3d and then I would like to make short beautiful animations, for example Coco playing the drums.
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>>80234
(I forgot to mention that this is the first time I've ever painted a horse.)
(I forgot to mention that this is the first time I've ever painted a horse.)
>>80311
Dude, I could never draw a horse like that. Amazing job,you should be a drawGOD.
Dude, I could never draw a horse like that. Amazing job,you should be a drawGOD.
Pencil drawn horses remind me of that suicidal Zaryan from suicide livestream thread
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You know, zaryans, I didn't tell you this, but I want to make my own comic book based on Zellig. but this is not some kind of small Maya sweet comic book where there is a mini-plot that is not related to the pilot, I want to draw a full-fledged story with a start where we are introduced to the main characters and an ongoing and long plot in which the characters develop and their mini-plots take place and a good ending. and I have a lot of ideas about the characters, about what actions will take place and how the main characters will develop. but there is a problem. I do not know how to start this story. and here is an example of pilot Massak, he made a good start to the whole story, but I don't want to repeat everything after him, and it seems to me that the pilot looks like it's episode 5, 9 or 10 of the entire season and is not episode 1, as it seems to me that I should start the story from the very beginning, even before the events pilot or Maya sweet, I have some idea now, but I'm not sure about it, I can send it if you want.
>>81529
Zaryan I suggest to write a script first so you have a good idea of the story and mostly to keep it doable, it might not seem like too much of a hurdle now, but remember to keep it in the realm of possibilities
Zaryan I suggest to write a script first so you have a good idea of the story and mostly to keep it doable, it might not seem like too much of a hurdle now, but remember to keep it in the realm of possibilities
>>81531
I absolutely do not understand the rule of writing a script or something in the book style, but I wrote something with my crooked fingers.
I absolutely do not understand the rule of writing a script or something in the book style, but I wrote something with my crooked fingers.
>>81538
A script is a guideline, usually things without a script do not work unless you know exactly how to keep things going
A script is a guideline, usually things without a script do not work unless you know exactly how to keep things going
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A dark room appears to our view... it has a computer desk that was the only one that was not covered with dust, there was a monitor on it that seemed to have been turned off only recently, clothes were scattered around the floor, because of this, everything was filled with a sense of abandonment of this place, but there was a bed next to the computer and in it lay fully covered with a blanket The culprit of this celebration, she only recently fell asleep, because only recently she sat all night at this PC.but suddenly the ringing of the phone that had been lying by the bed all this time crashed into the dark room, and the person who was wrapped in a trapped dream pulled the blanket away from her head and barely opened her dark eyelids.
She noticed the phone ringing next to her and reached for it with her thin, trembling hand. and picking up the phone, she tried to cut off the sound in it, which she did poorly because she did not fully wake up, and she stood up slightly to finally cut off the annoying sound, which she managed to do. This one especially took a look at the look of her room and she quickly turned away as if she didn't care what state everything was in, it was preferable for her to look at her phone screen. On the screen was an image from her favorite anime that she loved to watch all the time, eating it with her favorite cookies, which were just lying on her desk. but besides the image on her screen, there were messages that notified her of updates in her favorite games, she brushed aside all these messages and paid attention to the time and she saw something that made her suddenly wake up and shake. It was September 1st... the most terrible day for her, because on this day all people of her age go to the most unpleasant place. school... It sounded in the young lady 's head.she covered herself with a blanket again and at the same time began to tremble and breathe rapidly, as if she had been caught in the act of a crime, she began to see terrible images of people who were threatening, mocking and contemptuously looking at her from this, he began to come up with all possible ways that helped her not to go to a place that was hell on earth for her before, from the bucket that she had under her bed and which she didn't use much and it worked effectively before she twisted her leg, which she never did for fear of pain. at some point, she even came up with the idea of just jumping off the window so that everything would work for sure and she would not suffer, as it seemed to her, a worse fate. and at some point, she just thought that "maybe everyone just won't notice this date on the calendar and she'll stay in bed as if nothing had happened," she thought about it, and she relaxed and slowly began to fall asleep. Suddenly!
She heard something slowly approaching her door...
her eyes opened abruptly, and lady herself began to breathe quickly, looking at the door and what awaited her because she knew what it was and what would happen right now
It stopped and Maya abruptly covered herself with a blanket.
Maya heard the door handle move and the door open.
It started to go in her direction
Girl began to pray that the blanket would not be pulled off and she would be accepted as dead in bed. what she was afraid of came to her window and pulled back the curtain that did not let in the bright light of what turned out to be a sunny morning. And she began to realize that she was going to come to an end, and the only thing she could do was hold on to her blanket, which protected her from this threat that stood in front of her like a shield.
And suddenly it took hold of the blanket, and Girl also grabbed onto the blanket so that she wouldn't be yanked out, but it was stronger than her and pulled the blanket out of her hands, and Girl was naked in front of this room, which was illuminated by the light from the window.
and now it became better to see this person, she had long disheveled black hair, they did not look in the best condition, as if the owner had not washed them for a long time, did not even want to comb these lumps in which pieces of dandruff were visible, her face was also not in the best shape, there were large bruises around her eyes due to the strong lack of sleep and poor sleep patterns, and the skin on my face was dry and peeling off. she herself was wearing a red sweater on which there were crumbs and stains from the food that she ate all the time, her legs were twisted, they showed stockings of red and white color
And suddenly, this is what lady was afraid of and what she was trying to hide from, it said said the words as if not some terrible monster that tried to tear the lady apart, but as an angel that came for her to bring revelation...
"HOI MAYA!" And the girl who had been called Maya all this time began to open her red eyes, fearing the bright sunlight and what she was afraid of and that she had a gentle voice like an angel and covered her face with her sweaty, trembling hands.
but despite this, she managed to do it and in front of her stood the same young lady who looked like the exact opposite of Maya, she had lush bright blonde hair that looked elegant on her, her eyes emitted charming rays and they looked not with malice, but kindness and understanding, and her lips were expressed In a smile that complemented her whole face, she was wearing a green T-shirt along with green shorts.
She noticed the phone ringing next to her and reached for it with her thin, trembling hand. and picking up the phone, she tried to cut off the sound in it, which she did poorly because she did not fully wake up, and she stood up slightly to finally cut off the annoying sound, which she managed to do. This one especially took a look at the look of her room and she quickly turned away as if she didn't care what state everything was in, it was preferable for her to look at her phone screen. On the screen was an image from her favorite anime that she loved to watch all the time, eating it with her favorite cookies, which were just lying on her desk. but besides the image on her screen, there were messages that notified her of updates in her favorite games, she brushed aside all these messages and paid attention to the time and she saw something that made her suddenly wake up and shake. It was September 1st... the most terrible day for her, because on this day all people of her age go to the most unpleasant place. school... It sounded in the young lady 's head.she covered herself with a blanket again and at the same time began to tremble and breathe rapidly, as if she had been caught in the act of a crime, she began to see terrible images of people who were threatening, mocking and contemptuously looking at her from this, he began to come up with all possible ways that helped her not to go to a place that was hell on earth for her before, from the bucket that she had under her bed and which she didn't use much and it worked effectively before she twisted her leg, which she never did for fear of pain. at some point, she even came up with the idea of just jumping off the window so that everything would work for sure and she would not suffer, as it seemed to her, a worse fate. and at some point, she just thought that "maybe everyone just won't notice this date on the calendar and she'll stay in bed as if nothing had happened," she thought about it, and she relaxed and slowly began to fall asleep. Suddenly!
She heard something slowly approaching her door...
her eyes opened abruptly, and lady herself began to breathe quickly, looking at the door and what awaited her because she knew what it was and what would happen right now
It stopped and Maya abruptly covered herself with a blanket.
Maya heard the door handle move and the door open.
It started to go in her direction
Girl began to pray that the blanket would not be pulled off and she would be accepted as dead in bed. what she was afraid of came to her window and pulled back the curtain that did not let in the bright light of what turned out to be a sunny morning. And she began to realize that she was going to come to an end, and the only thing she could do was hold on to her blanket, which protected her from this threat that stood in front of her like a shield.
And suddenly it took hold of the blanket, and Girl also grabbed onto the blanket so that she wouldn't be yanked out, but it was stronger than her and pulled the blanket out of her hands, and Girl was naked in front of this room, which was illuminated by the light from the window.
and now it became better to see this person, she had long disheveled black hair, they did not look in the best condition, as if the owner had not washed them for a long time, did not even want to comb these lumps in which pieces of dandruff were visible, her face was also not in the best shape, there were large bruises around her eyes due to the strong lack of sleep and poor sleep patterns, and the skin on my face was dry and peeling off. she herself was wearing a red sweater on which there were crumbs and stains from the food that she ate all the time, her legs were twisted, they showed stockings of red and white color
And suddenly, this is what lady was afraid of and what she was trying to hide from, it said said the words as if not some terrible monster that tried to tear the lady apart, but as an angel that came for her to bring revelation...
"HOI MAYA!" And the girl who had been called Maya all this time began to open her red eyes, fearing the bright sunlight and what she was afraid of and that she had a gentle voice like an angel and covered her face with her sweaty, trembling hands.
but despite this, she managed to do it and in front of her stood the same young lady who looked like the exact opposite of Maya, she had lush bright blonde hair that looked elegant on her, her eyes emitted charming rays and they looked not with malice, but kindness and understanding, and her lips were expressed In a smile that complemented her whole face, she was wearing a green T-shirt along with green shorts.
>>81556
Maya decided to return the greeting of this beautiful lady, while still being afraid of her and the light, which was scary for her as for a vampire. "hhhh-hee-llo Ccc-coco..." Her voice was trembling and she spoke uncertainly, afraid of being noticed. but the girl named Coco started talking without paying any attention to this detail. "Good morning Maya, today is September 1st, and therefore a new school year begins for us. we need to get ready for this and first you need to get out of bed" She spoke with confidence and cheerfulness, as if fully convinced that this day would be the most for the two of them. And Maya started muttering about it. "yy-you know... i i i fe-eel nnn-not good tt-to-day... may-be i'm sick..."
She said these words like an inexperienced actor in a cheap movie, and it didn't look good, and Coco seemed to notice it and gently and gently touched Maya's hand in order to check something. and for good reason, because after that Maya fearfully jerked away to the other side of the bed and couldn't resist falling off it onto the dirty floor. She turned towards Coco and said loudly and with an abusive voice. "www-wha-t are yy-you doing?!" and Coco, with a questioning face, began to wonder. "Hmm, it's weird, but you're not hot, and you seem to be moving normally."
and Maya, just as badly playing the role of the patient, began to mumble an even better idea, as it seemed to her at that moment. "yy-you kk-know... mm-maybe it's something rare and unexplored!.."
To which Coco replied "It's strange how you could have picked up anything, because you've only left the house 3 times all summer, and even then to the nearest store"
And Coco looked with a grin at Maya, who was writhing on the floor, and at that moment Maya finally gave up realizing that there were only bad cards in her deck. she climbed onto her bed and looked at the floor with a sad face, Coco sat down next to her and began to say encouraging words, looking at Maya with a knowing face. "Hey Maya, don't worry so much, I understand everything and don't judge you, today is only the first day at the beginning of our studies, and nothing will happen to you, I will always be there for you and I will be ready to help you" Maya only looked at Coco for a second and abruptly started looking down at her feet again.
And Coco got up and started going to lunch, and turning to Maya, she said. "I'll be waiting for you there and I'll come back if you're late, Mom made us crapes especially for you" And Coco closed the door.
Maya sat and tried to process everything that had happened and not start crying.
Maya decided to return the greeting of this beautiful lady, while still being afraid of her and the light, which was scary for her as for a vampire. "hhhh-hee-llo Ccc-coco..." Her voice was trembling and she spoke uncertainly, afraid of being noticed. but the girl named Coco started talking without paying any attention to this detail. "Good morning Maya, today is September 1st, and therefore a new school year begins for us. we need to get ready for this and first you need to get out of bed" She spoke with confidence and cheerfulness, as if fully convinced that this day would be the most for the two of them. And Maya started muttering about it. "yy-you know... i i i fe-eel nnn-not good tt-to-day... may-be i'm sick..."
She said these words like an inexperienced actor in a cheap movie, and it didn't look good, and Coco seemed to notice it and gently and gently touched Maya's hand in order to check something. and for good reason, because after that Maya fearfully jerked away to the other side of the bed and couldn't resist falling off it onto the dirty floor. She turned towards Coco and said loudly and with an abusive voice. "www-wha-t are yy-you doing?!" and Coco, with a questioning face, began to wonder. "Hmm, it's weird, but you're not hot, and you seem to be moving normally."
and Maya, just as badly playing the role of the patient, began to mumble an even better idea, as it seemed to her at that moment. "yy-you kk-know... mm-maybe it's something rare and unexplored!.."
To which Coco replied "It's strange how you could have picked up anything, because you've only left the house 3 times all summer, and even then to the nearest store"
And Coco looked with a grin at Maya, who was writhing on the floor, and at that moment Maya finally gave up realizing that there were only bad cards in her deck. she climbed onto her bed and looked at the floor with a sad face, Coco sat down next to her and began to say encouraging words, looking at Maya with a knowing face. "Hey Maya, don't worry so much, I understand everything and don't judge you, today is only the first day at the beginning of our studies, and nothing will happen to you, I will always be there for you and I will be ready to help you" Maya only looked at Coco for a second and abruptly started looking down at her feet again.
And Coco got up and started going to lunch, and turning to Maya, she said. "I'll be waiting for you there and I'll come back if you're late, Mom made us crapes especially for you" And Coco closed the door.
Maya sat and tried to process everything that had happened and not start crying.
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>>81557
that's all for now, and now I'm thinking about how to embed Maimai here and introduce her to the reader, as if we're seeing her for the first time and only getting to know her. and you can also write your criticism of what I've written so far, because the dude I sent it to said that such a beginning is banal, where the hero awakens and such, and therefore I want to hear your opinion.
>>81557
that's all for now, and now I'm thinking about how to embed Maimai here and introduce her to the reader, as if we're seeing her for the first time and only getting to know her. and you can also write your criticism of what I've written so far, because the dude I sent it to said that such a beginning is banal, where the hero awakens and such, and therefore I want to hear your opinion.
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>wordswordswords
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>>81559
In my old age, I will look like Leo Tolstoy.
In my old age, I will look like Leo Tolstoy.
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>>81569
The most interesting thing is that I didn't even use AI for this, but I wanted to give it a better look, but I decided to post the whole idea like this.
The most interesting thing is that I didn't even use AI for this, but I wanted to give it a better look, but I decided to post the whole idea like this.
AI please summarize this whole words for me, I'm too much of a nigger to understand this
>>81529
Will not get finished, but I look forward to seeing the conceptual stuff
Will not get finished, but I look forward to seeing the conceptual stuff
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>>81556
here we go
here we go
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>>86254
Actually, I drew a brooch with Maya and it's like this is the very beginning of the ongesellig story and that's why the cover is so simple.
Actually, I drew a brooch with Maya and it's like this is the very beginning of the ongesellig story and that's why the cover is so simple.
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>>86298
I also want to make covers in the future, like they did in real European comics like Tintin or Asterix and Obelix.
I also want to make covers in the future, like they did in real European comics like Tintin or Asterix and Obelix.
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