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I recently dove cock first into fanfictions, most of them are vantablack niggerhell, but these are gemmies that YOU VVILL READ
Death & Reborn: A bone-chilling, spine-tingling, genre-redefining, character-driven ZEMERALD of Maya failing to ACK herself after feeling guilty for BEATING THE CLITTY OUT OF COCO or something: https://archiveofourown.org/works/62666986/chapters/160421989
Reunion: Takes place 10 years after the pilot or something with the family reuniting o algo, and Coco and Mymy get Maya to stop being a CLITTYCELL and go outside: https://archiveofourown.org/works/64015864/chapters/164218912
Hoi Maya: Maya ACKed herself and Coco keeps writing letters to her cause SHE WON'T TAKE HER MEDS!!!!!: https://archiveofourown.org/works/67132486
EVERYTHING ELSE I EITHER HAVEN'T READ OR IS VANTABLACK BRIMSTONE!!!!!
>everyone hates maya
>maya kills herself... 2
drop DEAD
this sounds very sad so i will NOT be reading actually
Geg
its written like an english textbook for schools but it was a gem
It was an ESL gem and it's such a shame that the author deleted it out of spite
https://jumpshare.com/v/99bl0FDueviTcnX0atda
Here you go for your enjoyment (it lacks the last chapter which is now lost mediarino)
"Reunion" is boring.
"Death & Reborn" is interesting, I'll read this later.
marge what fetish? i was just aboyt to start reading it cause it seemed the most interesting out of all three but im doubted now
If you like the idea of girls suffering (because you're a clittycel), read it. S tier gooning material.
If you don't like that, there's not much reason to read it, it's not a hecking cautionary tale or anything.
It's just paragraph after paragraph of suffering with no real substance, and it feels like it was written to arouse sadists.
We are dark triad here nigga take yo sensitive ass back to r/ongezellig
>OH MY GAHD DUDE ISN'T IT SUCH HECKING A24 DEEP INTELLECTUAL EMOTIONAL JUMPSCARE-FREE SLOWBURN SPINE-TINGLING FICTIONKINO TO WATCH A GIRL KILL HERSELF AND THEN WATCH HER ADOPTED SISTERS FUCKING SUFFER FOR NINE DECADES OH MY GAHD DUDE IT'S JUST LIKE GUTS OR SERIAL EXPERIMENTS LAIN EVEN THOUGH THOSE THINGS HAVE NO FUCKING RELATION TO EACHOTHER AT ALL BESIDES BEING LE SAD GAHD I'M SUCH AN EMOTIONALLY STRONG HUMAN BEING DESPITE NEVER EXPERIENCING ANYTHING UPSETTING IN MY ENTIRE LIFE OF DRINKING SOYLENT AND EATING SUGARY CEREALS AND DON'T FORGET THE FUCKING IPA BEERS BRO
>What a bold and interesting topic haha not like I enjoy seeing girls suffering for no reason haha
They probably say this.
<reddit space
Reading Death & Reborn and I'm starting to feel like everybody who likes this Dutch tranime is just a fucking dramaqueen.
>I'm starting to feel like everybody who likes this Dutch tranime is just a fucking dramaqueen.
Well even massa's inner circle were having 'cord drama among themselves way before soyteens found the show
Man, what a great way to spend your shit life, being sad all the time, not pathetic at all.
Seriously, what is this? People need to learn to enjoy life every once in a while.
Zeg, no arrow thoughbeit.
FUCK DID YOU JUST SAY TO ME FAGGOT?!?!?!? NO FUCKING ARROW!?!?!? HOW ABOUT THE FUCCKING ARROW ILL SHOOT THROUGH YOUR FUCCKING WINDOW YOU FUCCKING FAGGGOT!!!!!111!!!!!!11!!
It was Mymy and a bunch of classmates playing HOI4 together and they finally brought up the fact that Maya was an unwholesome alcoholic, then it ends
In general I think attempting/committing suicide is kind of a mischaracterization of Maya and Hoi Maya is excessively depressing. Reunion is actually a heart warming, soul touching, life affirming, eslGOD gem about the sisters’ love (if you can look past all of Mymy’s oc sailor friends). Thank you for the read zaryan.
It's said and shown time and time again that Maya is a pussy and even in the worst cases she'd never actually put herself in a dangerous situation
(OP HERE) HOI MAYA IS COAL, I PUT IT HERE CAUSE THE MEDS JOKE
i have never been more invested in a piece of literacy in my entire life, first few chapters kinda suck though
I got permabanned from reddit for saying this; that such thing as female HOI4 players were either trannies or niggas pretending to be foids. I wonder who would have been triggered by such statement...
Someone ought to continue that piece of kino in the same ESL style
>fippy bippy
keep gooning to and propogating offsite tranny fanfiction, this is why the zarty is dead. everyone is an offsiter. everyone
>keep gooning to and propogating offsite tranny fanfiction, this is why the zarty is dead. everyone is an offsiter. everyone
>everyone is a soulless brown new shartycuck and maya has become the go-to self insert for invalid trannies and retarded chudcels alike for displaying how much they want to kill themselves. there's never been more 'zellig ackjaks on the catalog or index despite the zellig lee's who created them having dying out like all the other oldfags a long time ago. how is this possible? how did things get so brown and retarded? why is everyone so obsessed with suicide and abuse?
>why is everyone so obsessed with suicide and abuse?
the first noble truth is that life is suffering o algo
meds, i'm a chudquoter and i'm a cute trans girl that doesn't use xitter.
i should write the last chapter like the last episode of breaking bad. Maya just kills everyone in the alcohol gang or something and dies o algo
ADLAL was gemmy(doe it was made by a troon), they privated it because they're retarded or something but I 'chived it
i hated this because 1. literally everything prior to chapter 9 is completely fucking ignored, and 2. Roos has NO FUCKING REASON TO LIKE MAYA. 3. the formating is awful, niggerfag has never heard of the enter key. 4. the pacing is awful, maya just cut herself and her family saw it? welp its never addressed and her family NEVER BOTHERS TO FUCKING MENTION IT AGAIN
what really pisses me off, is that the epilogue is really good. it couldve just been its own short story
yeah that's all a trvke, I like it mainly because it didn't take 2 weeks for every chapter to release and because it actually had some good length
and the Roos part is so funny, it's obvious the author is self inserting as Maya and Roos is a way of fantasizing of being saved by a woman. He doesn't want to put effort into fixing himself so he fantasizes about being saved by some woman for no reason
that's notably similar to fiction made by women where the female protagonist is sweeped off their feet by or fought over by big beautiful muscular men.
also im really tired of people pretending that 10 dutch days is a bone-chilling, spine-tingling, genre-redefining, character-driven ZEMERALD because it FUCKING SUCKS
the dialogue is annoying, the author keeps mentioning things that dont fucking matter, and they wont shut up about THE HECKIN RPG THAT MAYA MADE
cool concept doe
some plebbit fanfic on AO3 that take place in the future. coco is essentially maya now, and maya is somewhat like Coco now, but she still has anxiety. id maybe recommend reading it if your bored, but dont bother otherwise
10DD is an example of ideaslop, it's all concept, no actually good writing just the "omg Coco is Maya and Maya is Coco" idea
yeah the Roos part is easily the most coally and self insert thing imaginable
it couldve been so gemmy doe. if they had gotten into a circumstance where they had to talk to eachother (ie forced to work together on a project) then that could start their friendship then relationship. but APPARENTLY THATS TOO HARD
it could have, but the author chose to fill it with retarded dialogue and SNCA that just dragged the story pointlessly
Most of the dialogue is clunky and the Roos thing does feel forced but I can suspend my disbelief and say it is possible for Roos to have a crush on Maya. But the ending with the whole “it’s okay Maya you don’t have to make anymore actual progress on your struggles which has been the entire focus so far, I’ll just carry around a bag to baby you from now on” really fucking sucks and defeats the whole point of the story. Goes from iron to coal with the last chapter.
that part genuinely pissed me off, the author actually want to be babied and treated like a child(not surprising for a troon), so they self insert as Maya
think what happened is the author decided to private them like a SLF
Seasons 2 and 4 are seemingly lost but here's season 3(doe it's a pain to actually read because archive is being retarded, just screenshot it or something):https://web.archive.org/web/20250607142254/https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ReWi4q0fpLO92o9B_aZrj1Bg8rG8PFNc/edit?tab=t.0
SNCA award
click the see other pages archived under this link or something
Probably some weird nigga inserting themselves into relationships with the characters
https://camongezellig.newgrounds.com/art
>>108373
No Cam is alright, it’s a little self insert-y but Mats was mainly just supposed to be a genderbent Maya.
i hunger for more zellig comics
Mats is a bit of a self insert but he actually works because he fits into the story (4 letter name + plot relevance) and isn't the main focus like almost every other faggot oc in zellig fics
I also think he could be a good friendship for Maya but I don't know if they could have a relationship.
NOBODY is reading a full novel’s length worth of incestyurigarbage nigga
its a gay incest fanfic about two sixteen year olds. i dont need to read it to know it's shit
It was actually pretty brave to post that knowing how everybody would react to yuripedoincest geg. I skimmed a few chapters and it is actually well written and seems more of an emotional examination than anything, but the sisters kiss so IT IS FUCKING COAL
It seemed like a lot of shit about Coco’s band. Zoey’s mom has terminal aids or something and Zoey is glad she’s dying which sets off Coco’s PTSD. Coco cuts herself, she and Maya get close because Coco eases her anxiety and she eases Coco’s existential angst. But I only read half of like 4 chapters so take it with a grain of salt.
i read the whole thing, and there was never a moment in it where i felt uncomfortable
yeah its definitely more about the emotions than the love
I think Maya and Coco are both pretty broken and them learning to lean on each other to help them deal with their problems is nice, even contact like cuddling could be good sometimes, but having siblings kissing while laying in bed together and quasi-dating is just too far.
<Even in cases of adoption, Fritzl.
i do agree, but it never made me feel weirded out or grossed out, which i think is a massive accomplishment considering what it is
>im not grossed out by incest therefore this yuri incestnegro coal is actually heckin good!
i think youre just a fucking freak
>ignores my point
>proclaims i mean another thing
>attacks that point
>proclaims victory
literal textbook example of a strawman
>muh heckin strawman
go back to plebbit you fucking faggot
my point still stands, you complimented the incest fanfic while saying that the incest didnt gross you out at all. therefore i think youre an incest-loving retarded freak
im sure the guy that has been talking about how much he loves this incest fanfic for the past 4 hours is purely baiting, and not doing it because he actually thinks the story is good or anything
please tell me your point so i can read it and decide that it doesnt change anything and youre still a gross incestfag
I think his point is that incest is always gross, but this story handles it in a way that is much less gross than usual. Or something.
if he wasnt baiting thats probably what he meant. but i think hes baiting regardless
Idk it didn’t seem like bait to me. I mean it is well written and it does deal with Coco’s PTSD in an interesting way. It’s a shame these authors can’t just reign it in a little bit.
if you were expecting to be stabbed in the heart, only to see that you've been poked by a toothpick, you'd say "oh, that hurt but it wasn't as bad as i thought itd be"
it be a lot better if they didn't kiss eachother, the hugging is fine because thats what family does
Well cuddling may be a little beyond what family normally does but in their case I think it can make sense.
yes because as we all know, nobody downloads images they find funny here
i think it makes sense because Maya hasn't really had anyone, so her being clingy is accurate
you both also type the exact same way and you both occasionally forget to use arrows when youre using a soi to make fun of somebody. you are horribly autistic and im not surprised youre trying to create an incest circlejerk hellhole
Yeah and Coco is terrified of losing anybody again so holding can make her feel safe. But cuddling like that isn’t just normal family physical contact.
>>108507
>you both also type the exact same way and you both occasionally forget to use arrows when youre using a soi to make fun of somebody. you are horribly autistic and im not surprised youre trying to create an incest circlejerk hellhole
holy heckin seethe
why is this community filled with SLF who keep deleting their works
>>108524
summary: Coco essentially blames herself for Maya's ACKing. shes depresso espresso until maya's 19th birthday, where she gets shivers and believes that it was maya, and then she goes on the live a happy life because maya wants her to.
the last lines were something along the lines of "Maya and Coco are now in an eternal embrace, in a plane of existence beyond our understanding, their love dancing across the stars"
it was actually a really touching and sad story, which is why im so mad its been deleted
Trvke, sorry to whoever liked it but it was overwritten depressing coal about suicide (despite that being shown as something Maya would not do) and then about her sisters suffering for the rest of their lives. There was nothing redeeming about Hoi Maya and nothing of value has been lost.
Yeah if you don’t want to read page after page of a girl’s anguish at losing family FOR THE SECOND TIME, you just don’t have an appreciation for real A24 kino like I do. Never mind that to even get to this point they had to hamfistedly put in a suicide that makes no sense with no explanation. That doesn’t matter, all that matters is the suffering!
no arrow therefore you believe that
I've heard some of them stalk zarty, maybe they got rid of it because they don't want us to enjoy it(prime troon behavior)
Explains a lot geg, instead of wanting to improve their story they delete it because le hecking internet racists called it shit
Whatever sadistfag. Enjoy never reading your lost mediarino brimstone again, while I have already ‘chived my hope filled gems of perseverance and triumph GEG
>Whatever sadistfag. Enjoy never reading your lost mediarino brimstone again, while I have already ‘chived my hope filled gems of perseverance and triumph GEG
i mean you can keep jerking off to the reality you made up in your own head i guess
>>108565
>Im going to delete zellig media just because I dont like, now no one gets to enjoy it
You're a selfish little fuck and part of the reason zellig is dying, the least you plebbit cucks and do is leave it up so actual competent writers can learn from it
why do you care so much about the existence of some shitty fanfiction of a mildly amusing webtoon? go read actual literature or something
VANTARYAN TRVTH NVKE
Basically it's a yurislop fic where Cleo likes Coco and wants to get with her so she threatens Mymy and tells her not to spend time with Coco. Later on it's revealed that Cleo's behavior is because her dad is abusive or something(BLACK CHARACTER WITHOUT A GOOD FATHER FIGURE GGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEGGGGGGGGGGGG). Anyway after a bunch of SNCA it eventually ends with Coco punching Mymy(to the point there's blood) and Cleo ends up saying it's the other peoples fault and Coco is in the right(we are supposed to sympathize with her?). Ends with Coco crying or something.
Would be good as a retarded fic to laugh at if it wasn't 6 trillion pages long or something
>yuri
>it's explained how this stems from abusive parents
What did the author mean by this?
mymyabuse wnbag and wnbzc, i will never let anyone hurt Mymy
some dude called u/Bluetea345 wrote the fic ambitious delusions and total opposites but privated the first one because he's a selfish little fuck
They're mentally ill faggots who can't handle criticism
>>108730
IM WRITING A FANFIC ABOUT COCO BEATING UP MAYA'S SHITSKIN BULLY or whatever
I WANT CRITICISM CAUSE I NEED IT TO WRITE GEMMIES IN THE FUTURE, REGARDLESS OF IF IM WRITING COAL NOW
GOT TO HAVE COAL BEFORE GEMS
this you?
its so clear that this plebbitor just went with the first draft and didn't bother to improve upon it because... BECAUSE
I read it in its hekkin entirety and I’m too much of a lazy nigger to explain it but the ending pissed me off because it was an attempt of an open ended ending (which i don’t like but some do) but what made it especially shitty was that it ended extremely abruptly, like a cliff hanger but with no suspense really. I would appreciate it more if it ended off with (coco in this case) making a decision that can be taken into interpretation on what her intentions were but in this case the storyline was just dropped like a bag of rocks. I will say it wasn’t that bad, the yurislop only was obvious on the very last chapter when it was addressed, otherwise the story was mostly about family drama and Cleo threating mymy about snca. I’d call it iron. Most would probably call it rust or coal but i found the drama mildly entertaining.
it’s coal because it’s very clear when the author is intervening, making characters act out of character for the sake of the plot
cuz most of the communities filled with troons self projecting their echo chambered isolation
>>108708
The thing with Maya really pissed me off
I’m pretty biased cuz she’s my favorite character (cuz I also hate myself and am a lonely shithead geg) and the way she acts in this writing sooo bad.
It’s really obvious the author was forcing everything and it’s horrific shitslop yurifag nonsense
We reap the consequences of letting any litteral who to write whatever they want o algo.
https://archiveofourown.org/works/66103363/chapters/170354623
looked at ao3 a bit, past all the goonslop coal and the fics everyone knows about I found this one, it's not the most interesting and the last chapter is schizoslop but I haven't seen many fics with a paranormal aspect which is unique I guess
I read it already and it fucking sucks
The only decent one isDAR and even that shit was pretty piss poorly written
I hope writerfag makes a gem or something
Shitty ass fic that somehow manages to fuck up the characterisation of every single character, still better than yuricoal doebiet
trvke
also maya being a "belgian" is so overused that it's genuinely not funny anymore, it's just annoyed as shit
i kinda liked the fic "the election" https://archiveofourown.org/works/66336976/chapters/171043669
its somewhat bad, but its pretty entertaining and doesnt veer too far off of who the characters were (though some are a bit exagerrated)
what if Maya is Dutch, she was born in the Netherlands, and we should not trust the foreigner Coco, also Maya corrects Coco that she not from Belgium, she's from Brabant,
>completely missed the fucking point award
The “joke” is that people say shes Belgian when shes not because Coco is a fucking retard who tries to fix everyone problems instead of just listening
nu fic about maya getting Alzheimer's or whatever
https://archiveofourown.org/works/64650058/chapters/199724456
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