>>106117the 'teen who sent it did describe it in one sentence doe I can't be bothered to look for it.
overall the story is coal. the beginning started of zemmy since it could've branched off into exploring depression and alcoholism (with an optimistic ending hopefully). instead, what we got was normalslop. the characters weren't fleshed out that much and were given the "teenager" archetype. not to mention logical inconsistencies that were beyond the "suspension of disbelief"
>oh my heckin reviewerinoo!!!!!