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Markup /zellig/136553
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>>136548 i remember reading the AO3 version and how Rens went to Efteling with Coco because Maya didnt want to go. im assuming that these are different visits? also, not trying to convince you, but have you considered maybe just re-doing this from the ground up? i feel that it might be wise in order to prevent the story from feeling stitched together, or do you have a plan to prevent this from happening?