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Markup /zellig/131072
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>>130939 I enjoyed the story. It was clear, and stuck to the premise, but due to its shortness it lacked some depth in which you could have built some characterization, and I wish it was a little bit longer, and I really enjoyed the part where Maya becomes friends with Yfke. It also stuck to the lore pretty well, except for there being a rod in Maya's room, which I can't find any rods in her room, but I understand why it was there, plus Massa has a habit of changing their room layouts. You also have great punctuation. but in conclusion. I enjoyed it. And I hope you write more fan-fiction in the future
