Markup /zellig/67061

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>>66994
I don't know if this has been mentioned in the Telegram channel, but the translation has glaring mistakes. It wasn't properly researched or proofread, and its grammar, capitalization, and punctuation are a mess because they were obviously barely edited from the translation service used.
>mayamail 1
The end of the penultimate sentence is appended with "- babysitting".
>mayamail 2
Anne was fucking the boy she was hiding with, not flirting with him.
>mayamail 3
Wednesday was pakjesavond, not sinterklaas, and is referred to as such in the first sentence. 

Illusions/happy should be translated as delusion or delusions. 

Kruidnoten's TN should explain that these are the pastries she eats. 

Mymy doesn't say "the Cabinet of the Jack of Spades," she says "the schoppenboer cabinet". 

Translations should always maintain the capitalization presented.

If there are TNs, they should only be after the use of native words, and translated native words should never have TNs. 

TNs should never be guesses. 

In prose, TNs should be placed at the end of the chapter or work or at the bottom of the page, with reference numbers in the text directing to them where they are relevant, after the first use of the word.
>mayamail 4
She was "simsing", playing the Sims.
>mayamail 8
Korfball should have a TN.
>mayamail 11
Rozenactie means rose campaign, but it's not a school shop. It's a common type of charity campaign where people buy roses to give or send to each other on Valentine's Day.

Very was prolonged by the same amount as a previous elongation, but but and why have artificial elongations not reflective of how they're presented here. 

Then was unnecessarily inserted after but.